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BananaSlip
10-22-05, 01:05 AM
I found this the other day and made some modifications. Ahhhh, memories of youth and late nights dancing to melt down the enormous energy that never seemed to die down. Oh, happy times! :p


The Beat

feel it
thumping, tingling, tickling
inside and out
the bass
midnight wildness blooming
from your eyes
I see it
touching, tasting, blending
with the groove
I love it
fluid words, dripping
from my lips
I smile

Gourmet
10-22-05, 03:01 AM
Because I lived life as a "band chick" for many years, this hits home!

Thanks for sharing.

BananaSlip
10-24-05, 11:51 PM
You're welcome! :) Thanks for reading...

Gourmet
10-25-05, 11:23 AM
You are most welcome, however...
Wonder what I would have said if I had read the unedited version?


Probably would have left out the band chick part :)