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lunaslobo
08-31-06, 08:51 AM
I just re discovered this wonderfull writing style and would like to see some of our memebers examples here. thank you.

lunaslobo
08-31-06, 08:55 AM
I'll start:

To fast
I cant keep up with my thoughts
they lead me astray
to many unfullfilled jobs

lunaslobo
06-05-07, 10:52 PM
thinking way to fast
everything cluttered and messy
how do I slow down

lunaslobo
06-05-07, 10:54 PM
purple flowers at rest
tranquility, peacefull, hope
showing me the way

lunaslobo
06-05-07, 10:56 PM
Summer time shunshine
warming my soul to its core
freedom from the cold

lunaslobo
06-05-07, 11:00 PM
Where is happiness
Does it come at a high price
Afforded by me?

lunaslobo
06-05-07, 11:07 PM
race car
my mind is racing
tonight it seems so much more
cant get it to stop
though I try and try
itkeeps racing on andon
not knowing who wins
but does any one win?
how can I be the only
the lone racer won
is it one or won?
I can never tell which one?
which one realy won.

lunaslobo
06-05-07, 11:15 PM
now if you look at the shape at the last poem its in the outline of a car

QueensU_girl
06-06-07, 12:33 AM
is there a syllable rule for haikus? i can't remember what it is, or how many lines.

lunaslobo
06-06-07, 04:45 PM
the first line is five the second is seven the third is five, but I have seen them done with other patterns before, i think as long as you keep the pattern the same. say four six four, three five three, seven nine seven and ect. that way it flows.