Fraser_2468
10-24-07, 05:58 PM
So lets test our poetic skills, and create poems. :)
I will start off with this short one that I just finished off.
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Waking up in the morning, feeling brain dead
dreading my work, cause I cant get ahead
My mind feels all foggy, I feel it each day
9 thoughts in my head, they wont go away
Pacing about, looking confused
Running away, feeling abused
Cannot escape, this prison inside
Needing some time, but nowhere to hide
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I will start off with this short one that I just finished off.
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Waking up in the morning, feeling brain dead
dreading my work, cause I cant get ahead
My mind feels all foggy, I feel it each day
9 thoughts in my head, they wont go away
Pacing about, looking confused
Running away, feeling abused
Cannot escape, this prison inside
Needing some time, but nowhere to hide
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