View Full Version : totally off topic....a poem

08-04-10, 01:25 PM
there's this beautiful poem i wanted to share with everyone. it has nothing to do with adhd or anxiety or such. but i love it so much i wanted to share it with everyone. i am sorry if i shouldnt post it or get introuble or or the what ifs.........

What makes a Mother
I thought of you and closed my eyes
And prayed to God today.
I asked what makes a Mother
And I know I heard him say.
A Mother has a baby
This we know is true.'
But God, can you be a Mother
When your baby's not with you?
Yes, you can, He replied
With confidence in His voice
I give many women babies
When they leave is not their choice.
Some I send for a lifetime
And others for a day.
And some I send to feel your womb
But there's no need to stay.
I just don't understand this,
God I want my baby here
He took a breath and cleared His throat
And then I saw a tear.
I wish I could show you
What your child is doing today.
If you could see your child smile with other children and say:
"We go to earth to learn our lessons Of love and life and fear.
My Mommy loved me oh so much I got to come straight here.
I feel so lucky to have a Mom
Who had so much love for me
I learned my lesson very quickly
My Mommy set me free.
I miss my Mommy oh so much
But I visit her each day.
When she goes to sleep
On her pillow's where I lay.
I stroke her hair and kiss her cheek
And whisper in her ear.
"Mommy don't be sad today I'm your baby and I'm here."
So you see my dear sweet one
Your children are ok
Your babies are here in My home
And this is where they'll stay.
They'll wait for you with Me
Until your lesson is through.
And on the day that you come home
They'll be at the gates for you.
So now you see what makes a Mother
It's the feeling in your heart.
It's the love you had so much of
Right from the very start.

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08-04-10, 01:47 PM

For future reference there's a creative writing subforum for this kinda thing.

Don't worry about this post. The Mods will just move it there sooner or later.

08-04-10, 01:49 PM
i cant ever find all the forums or sub forums ...........i literally run into a few on accident.....

08-04-10, 01:53 PM
Its okay, you'll get used to it.

08-04-10, 03:25 PM
Beautiful poem, Resa.

If you went back to your post in Relationships, you saw that it was moved and there was a link to bring you here.

Right under the VBulletin logo at the top of the page is the pathway to get here:

ADD Forums - Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder Support and Information Resources Community > ADDF Lounge > Creative Writing > Poetry

You can step backwards by clicking first Poetry- this shows you everything current in that section, then ADDF Lounge- this shows you everything in the Lounge area, Then ADDF Community- the "top" of the forum.

Hope this is helpful!

08-04-10, 10:19 PM
ahhh, thank you :)