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a poem that i wrote that is really bad and im hoping for edits!!

Posted 10-01-08 at 06:17 PM by Juliak
the rain drops fall, soaked up into the ground.
They become streams and brooks which
become rivers that wind their way
around the mountains
and into valleys.
They lead the raindrops
to the lakes where they stay for a day or more.
The lakes flow down,
becoming rivers again,
which flow into gulfs
and gulfs become oceans.
The raindrops are all still there, every last one.
None got lost but for some, its time to go.
Some will stay there years,
mingling with other drops
and travel the oceans on currents.
They will get evaporated
and become clouds
which in turn will become raindrops again.
And they continue in this never ending cycle
of the earth.

-rooney smile
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