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Old 04-11-03, 03:58 PM
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My Heart Is Breaking

My heart is breaking babe
Slowly but surely
As each day drags on
Minutes and hours go by
And then another day is gone
Does this mean
I am one day closer to you
Or am I one day closer
To having my heart broken
Cause my heart is breaking babe
Slowly but surely
As each day goes by
Every time I see you
And every time I hear you
I look at the clock and know
Another day is gone
My heart is breaking babe
Cause I will not see you
When you come home from work
I will not see you
As you walk in the door
I won’t even see you
Until you want me too
Until you are ready too
Have you been home for minutes
Or hours babe
Before we connect in our own world
And my heart is breaking babe
Cause at the end of the night
When we have both said good night
I will be seeing you in my dreams
But I cannot touch you
And I cannot hold you close
And my heart is breaking babe
And your not even here
To wipe the tears away
As they stream down my face
Cause my heart is breaking babe
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Old 02-20-04, 09:59 PM
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Lisa.... this one is very very good & I definitely relate to it.
Hugssss to you my friend
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Old 02-24-04, 12:46 AM
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Hugs lisa, that one brought tears to my eyes, but, being a man, I held them back. Very touching. Big hugs and a good tight squeeze at the end of the comforting, back rubbing hug.
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Yes gil, this one is a tear jerker for sure.
Each time I read it I cry like a baby.
I so relate to it.
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Lisa, (tears, goose bumps and sadness) those are my reaction's to this one while beautiful it hits too close to home. We get so mixed up in everyday life and troubles, I tend to forget that I have a back up plan and neglect the big guy. So, after reading this I did go and sit by him and just held his hand as I do not ever take the innitiative I found it comforting that he held tight.

Hugs to you Lisa
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Aww, Futs, that is adorable. I can't wait until I am married to my sweetie. (sigh) That'll be sometime down the road.... it feels like it's going to be FOREVER till it happens though, lol. What can I say? I have a weak spot for holding hands.... lol.
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Awwww futs........ that is so sweet.
I am so glad you found the comfort you need.
Love ya
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Hugs BnB.... I can feel this... deep down where the heart strings pull tight.

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