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Old 05-02-10, 04:29 PM
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Somewhere else (short poem)

In a suburb in Iraq,

Soldiers kill a parent
And maim a daughter,
In a mini-van,
At a battle.

Oh well.


This is kind of a reaction poem to that WikiLeaks thing released in April. It works well as stand alone, but that phrase "at a battle" changes dramatically when you visually see the casualness of the pedestrians attacked.
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